10 October 2014

OctPoWriMo 10 - So sick

I am so sick today. I spent the whole day in bed, but then I really didn't want to miss a day of poetry, so I put together a haiku. I didn't follow the prompt.

So Sick

My head is floating
I spent the whole day in bed
So sick I can’t breathe


  1. Same here, migraine. Did what I had to do, including getting a poem out. Hope you feel better soon, and thanks for the haiku! I love haiku, such a beautiful form.

  2. Get better soon! At least your poetry didn't suffer. I too like haiku for both reading and writing

  3. Very nice haiku! So impressive that you did this amidst a migraine. Hope you get better soon!

  4. I understand and hope you're feeling better soon. Your haiku, while not written about mental illness, still easily applies. It's a good description of what I experienced during periods of severe clinical depression. Thank you for persevering through your pain.