Today's prompt is 2, or two, or too, or to. I went with a two stanza poem where each stanza is two lines, and I think I've used every permutation of to, two, and too that I could. I thought about making each line be only two beats, but that would have been too short, so I went with four beats per line (which is two times two).
To Two Too?
Too many things to do today;
I need two minutes to play and pray.
Too much on my plate for me to chew—
God, can you add a few hours too?
If he tosses some your way. can you share? I could always use a few extra hours.
ReplyDeleteA few more hours in a day are often a good thing--although I've had some days that I certainly wished were a lot shorter!
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So true! Thank you.
ReplyDeleteI know Im not alone in this but could I get a couple too if you have a connection?
ReplyDeleteLove it! Simple, playful, and oh so relatable. Who doesn't want more time?
ReplyDeleteVery nice, working with all the two, to, toos! Well, I'm not good at math, but the 4 beats worked out great! Thanks for stopping by my blog, 'too', Esther!
ReplyDeleteThis is me everyday. LOL. I really love this one for it's simplicity and how easy it is to relate.
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