Judge my writing; rhyme and metre;
Give me honest feedback.
Show me how to make it better;
I’m looking for a teacher.
Poets often can be thin-skinned;
We don’t take crit well.
Let me positively spin it:
We have a fragile shell.
I would rather be an artist
Who learns from others’ comments,
Who doesn’t feel that I’m a target
For all my work is flawless.