03 October 2017

OctPoWriMo 3 - The Taste of Metal

I took today's prompt, The Taste of Metal, quite literally. I also decided to try my hand at the suggested form, the cherita.



Acrid, sharp upon my tongue

Harsh and grating through my jaw
And up my spine

Metal tastes and feels like
It is killing me
If I bite it

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5 comments:

  1. Zannie Rose03 October, 2017 12:09

    metal as the enemy!

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  2. Here, There be a Writer03 October, 2017 13:05

    oooo...powerful! I like it. :-)

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  3. seekingmeme03 October, 2017 13:38

    I am shivering as your words bring that sensation of biting on metal to life. Well done!

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  4. mkvecchitto03 October, 2017 17:12

    Well done!

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  5. Christine03 October, 2017 18:21

    Wow, that is intense! You've really captured the feeling of sharp, metallic discomfort.

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