03 October 2017

OctPoWriMo 3 - The Taste of Metal

I took today's prompt, The Taste of Metal, quite literally. I also decided to try my hand at the suggested form, the cherita.

Acrid, sharp upon my tongue

Harsh and grating through my jaw
And up my spine

Metal tastes and feels like
It is killing me
If I bite it


  1. I am shivering as your words bring that sensation of biting on metal to life. Well done!

  2. Wow, that is intense! You've really captured the feeling of sharp, metallic discomfort.